15. If you think
you can add diversity to the school
to which you are applying, ask: Does
my essay specifically demonstrate how
my uniqueness will contribute to the
realm of campus opinion, the academic
environment, or the social life?
Every college, professional
school, or graduate school wants to
increase diversity. For this reason,
so many applicants are tempted to declare
what makes them different. However,
simply saying that you are a black,
lesbian female will not impress admissions
officers in the least. While an essay
incorporating this information would
probably be your best topic idea, you
must subtly handle the issue by addressing
your own personal qualities and how
you overcame stigma or dealt with social
ostracism. If you are a rich student
from Beverly Hills whose father is an
engineer and whose mother is a lawyer,
but you happen to be a minority, an
essay about how you dealt with adversity
would be unwise.
Once you have used this
checklist for each of the five to seven
topics you came up with in Lesson One,
narrow the list down to the three topics
that most easily pass all of the suggestions
above.
a. If more than three topics
pass the test above, then simply choose
the three that you are most excited
about.
b. If fewer than three
topics pass the test, go back to your
long list in Lesson One and run a few
more potential topics through our checklist.
At this point, you might
have a topic so inspiring that the essay
writes itself. However, even seemingly
boring topics can be made into exceptional
admissions essays with an innovative
approach. In writing the essay you must
bear in mind your two goals: to persuade
the admissions officer that you are
extremely worthy of admission and to
make the admissions officer aware that
you are more than a GPA and a standardized
score, that you are a real-life, intriguing
personality.
Unfortunately, there is
no surefire step-by-step method to writing
a good essay. EssayEdge editors will
recast your essay into a beautifully
sculpted masterpiece, but every topic
requires a different treatment since
no two essays are alike. Lessons 3 to
6 will guide you through the various
stages of writing a first-rate essay.
From
ESSAYS THAT WILL GET YOU INTO COLLEGE,
by Amy Burnham, Daniel Kaufman, and
Chris Dowhan.
Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman.
Reprinted by arrangement with Barron's
Educational Series, Inc.