7. Is my topic
unique?
Some students are so concerned about
making the correct impression that they
edit out anything that would help their
essay stand out. They submit a “safe”
essay that is, in reality, sterile,
monotonous, and deadly boring. Most
topics are in fact overdone, and this
is not necessarily a bad thing, but
a unique and convincing answer to a
classic topic can pay off big. Furthermore,
when applying to a competitive program
that might be out of your reach, taking
a risk in the essay may help your chances
by standing out.
Admissions Officer Says:
“Applicants should not be afraid to
go out on a limb and be themselves-even
when that means incorporating humor
or being a little bit controversial.”
8. Am I being myself?
Admissions officers want to learn about
you and your writing ability. You must
develop your own voice and tell YOUR
story, not the story you think the reader
wants to hear. Write about something
meaningful and describe what you did
and felt, and your essay will be unique.
Many people travel to foreign countries
or win competitions, but your feelings
during these events are unique to you.
Unless a philosophy or societal problem
has interested you intensely for years,
stay away from grand themes that you
have little personal experience with.
Admissions Officer Says:
“It is through the essay that the admissions
officers reading the application will
feel that they have truly gotten to
know you.”
9. Does my topic
avoid hot-button issues that may offend
the reader?
If you write on how everyone should
worship your God, how wrong or right
abortion is, or how you think the Republican
Party is evil, you will not get into
the college of your choice. The only
thing worse than not writing a memorable
essay is writing an essay that will
be remembered negatively. Stay away
from specific religions, political doctrines,
or controversial opinions. You can still
write an essay about Nietzsche's influence
on your life, but express understanding
that not all intelligent people will
agree with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize
instead Nietzsche's influence on YOUR
life, and not why you think he was wrong
or right in his beliefs.
Admissions Officer Says:
“It is dangerous for a non-professional
(especially a high school student) to
attempt writing as though the essay
will be presented at a professional
conference. You may be writing to someone
who knows much more than you and will
be irritated by your hackneyed proclamations.”
10. Is my essay
honest?
Unless you are a truly excellent writer,
your best, most passionate writing will
be about events that actually occurred.
While you might be tempted to invent
hardship, it is completely unnecessary.
Write an essay about your life that
demonstrates your personality.
Admissions Officer Says:
“After 15 years of reading hundreds
of essays a year, you develop an amazing
ability to see straight through the
bull.”
From
ESSAYS THAT WILL GET YOU INTO COLLEGE,
by Amy Burnham, Daniel Kaufman, and
Chris Dowhan.
Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman.
Reprinted by arrangement with Barron's
Educational Series, Inc.