Selecting
a Topic
by
EssayEdge
EXERCISE #2: SELECTING
A TOPIC
In this exercise, you will
find a list of Do’s and Don’ts for selecting
a topic, along with comments from long-time
admissions officers. For each of your
five to seven potential topics, fill
in this checklist. If you find yourself
repeatedly answering “no” to these questions
for any given topic, you should drop
it and move on to another.
1. Have I selected
a topic that describes something of
personal importance to my life?
Admissions Officer Says: “Personalize
your essays as much as possible-generic
essays are not only boring to read,
they’re a waste of time because they
don’t tell you anything to help you
get to know the applicant any better.”
2. Am I avoiding
a gimmicky topic?
You should be very, very careful of
trying to write your essay in iambic
pentameter or with lots of jokes. Almost
always, this is done poorly and is not
appreciated by the admissions committee.
Nothing is worse than not laughing at
something that was written to be funny.
Admissions Officer Says:
“Gimmicks are a big mistake, and a sarcastic
or flippant tone will often offend.”
3. Does my topic
stay away from information listed elsewhere
on my application?
Don’t mention GPAs or standardized test
scores in your essay. That’s what the
resume and other parts of the application
are for.
Admissions Officer Says:
“Listings of anything are dull, no matter
how impressive.” “Essays should be about
more than just a running tally of accomplishments.”
4. Will I be able
to offer vivid supporting paragraphs
to my essay topic?
Do not choose a topic if you cannot
provide concrete examples for the body
of the essay.
Admissions Officer Says:
“Details provide the color, the spice,
and the life of the essays.” “As the
saying goes, if you’re going to talk
the talk, you better walk the walk.”
5. Can I fully
answer the question asked of me? Can
you address and elaborate on all points
within the specified word limit, or
will you end up writing a poor summary
of something that might be interesting
as a report or research paper?
If you plan on writing something technical
for an application, make sure you can
back up your interest in a topic and
not merely throw around big scientific
words. Unless you convince the reader
that you actually have the life experiences
to back up your interest in neurobiology,
the reader will assume that you are
trying to impress him or her with shallow
tactics. Also, be sure that you can
write to admissions officers and that
you are not writing over their heads.
Admissions Officer Says:
“Actually answer the question they ask.
Many people just list off their accomplishments
and never relate it to the theme of
the question.”
6. Will my topic
keep the reader's interest from the
first word?
The entire essay must be interesting,
considering admissions officers will
probably spend only a few minutes reading
each essay.
Admissions Officer Says:
“If the first paragraph doesn’t fix
my attention, like anyone I’m prone
to skimming.”
From
ESSAYS THAT WILL GET YOU INTO COLLEGE,
by Amy Burnham, Daniel Kaufman, and
Chris Dowhan.
Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman.
Reprinted by arrangement with Barron's
Educational Series, Inc.
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