If you want to change a
passive-voice sentence to active voice,
find the agent in the phrase, the person
or thing that is performing the action
expressed in the verb. Make that agent
the subject of the sentence, and change
the verb accordingly. For many instances
of the passive voice in your essay,
you can follow these steps:
1. Do a global search for
the words “was” and then “were.” These
words often indicate the passive voice.
2. Cross out the “was”
or the “were.”
3. Add -ed to the verb
that follows “was” or “were.”
4. If that changed verb
does not make grammatical sense, it
is an irregular verb, so change it to
the simple past tense.
5. Rewrite the sentence
around the new active-voice verb.
From
ESSAYS THAT WILL GET YOU INTO COLLEGE,
by Amy Burnham, Daniel Kaufman, and
Chris Dowhan.
Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman.
Reprinted by arrangement with Barron's
Educational Series, Inc.