"If one thing
could be perfect, it should be
the essay." - Admissions
Officer
Writing is not a
one-time act. Writing is a process.
Memorable writing comes more from
rewriting than it does from the
first draft. By rewriting you
will improve your essay -- guaranteed.
If you skimp on the rewriting
process, you significantly reduce
the chances that your essay will
be as good as it could be.
Once you have taken
a break from your essay, come
back and read it through one time
with a fresh perspective. Analyze
it as objectively as possible
based on the following three components:
substance, structure, and interest.
Do not worry yet about surface
errors and spelling mistakes;
focus instead on the larger issues.
Consider reordering your supporting
details, delete irrelevant sections,
and make clear the broader implications
of your experiences.
Allow your more important
arguments to come to the foreground.
Take points that might only be
implicit and make them explicit.
In order to figure
out where revisions are necessary,
you are going to need as many
different sets of eyes to read
your essay as possible. Whether
it is you or one of your friends,
family members or teachers, these
questions will help guide your
revision process.
To
Title or Not
to Title? Some
essayists decide
to add a title
to their essay,
although most
do not. Titles
are definitely
not required,
and if you are
wondering whether
or not to add
one to yours,
remember the
old adage: when
in doubt, leave
it out.
From
ESSAYS THAT WILL GET YOU INTO
COLLEGE, by Amy Burnham, Daniel
Kaufman, and Chris Dowhan.
Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman.
Reprinted by arrangement with
Barron's Educational Series, Inc.